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Does this suck? I'm a fairly new 3D modeler, and i guess a newbie's eyes its good..but i want someone good's opinion. I'd appretiate any feedback, thanks.
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rerighthand Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2003
the metal on the back could use a different map the angle of the render makes it a little hard to judge the quality of the rest of the model maybe re-submit it at a few different angles. I remember spending days working on getting the perfect model constructed of a Gameboy pocket and in the final render all you could see was the front part in the scene.
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todd587 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2003
thanks much :) (Smile) appretiate it. i'm still learning 3DS max, and havent quite figured out reflections ;) (Wink) i'll keep messing around with it and i should be able to figure it out sooner or later. thanks again!
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tony-the-tiger Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2003   Digital Artist
Fix the wires... smooth them out, change the material... it doesn't look natural at the moment and stands out too much... I agree with ~lostspyder that you need to change table texture and add a bit of reflection.

And I'd like to add that you need a background. Obviosly you got a light source, black background just seems soo unnatural. Even a smiple image of the room should do the trick... you can then edit lights and shadows in PhotoShop :D (Big Grin)
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darkchemist Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2003
very cool, im not much of a 3d artist, so i cant have too much of an opinion on it, but i think it looks really good!
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lostspyder Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2003
its not bad. The pollygons need to be smothed on the wire, it looks like there a kink in it. The texture has to be redone on the bottom half. Other then that the modling looks fairly sound. A better render, one with reflections could do it wonders. Also there should be a bump texture on the ehadphones. The texture on the table is crappy. best sugestion tho would to add reflections.
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dr3 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2003
I like it. Nice render. What program?
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